Chapter 97 Reverse Deduction Is Fake
"Dad, the water's ready, let's take a bath together~" Akane held Li Xia's arm, looked up at his face, and laughed with innocence.
"Go wash yourself, you scoundrel!" Li Xia shook off Akane's hand, there was no way to deal with Akane. She seemed very willing to play the role of a daughter, and now she's completely in character.
"Teaching your daughter about physiology in the bathroom is the mark of a qualified father!" Akane pouted, wanting to rub her face against him: "Akane wants to learn about physiology."
"Nonsense!" Li Xia's mouth twitched, desperately pushing her away: "The kind of father you're talking about only appears in strange movies."
"Are you two going to take a bath or not?" Kiyoura Mai walked over in her pajamas, tying her golden, medium-length hair into a ponytail behind her head.
"Let this guy go first." Li Xia finally pulled his hand out of Akane's embrace and turned to see Kiyoura Mai's smiling eyes looking at him.
"What are you laughing at?"
"Haha, it's so true." Kiyoura Mai's gaze swept over the two: "Don't you think we look like a family, mom, dad, and child."
Li Xia waved his hand. "Come on. With a daughter like this, you'd definitely be driven crazy."
"Ouch~" Akane bit his finger.
After driving Akane away, Li Xia and Kiyoura Mai sat on the bed with a laptop in the middle.
"Let's get started then," Li Xia opened the script. "What do you think is the problem?"
"In terms of character development," Kiyoura Mai took out a nail clipper, sat next to him, and started trimming her nails, "but the characters are not well-rounded."
"For example, real women are different from female characters in movies and TV shows. Real girlfriends don't want you to bite them, nor would they moan so passionately. This script lacks sensory stimulation. In terms of character development, it must be authentic."
"Although your metaphor is quite inappropriate, I understand what you mean," Li Xia nodded. This script is all about storytelling and does not develop female characters. Therefore, during the actual filming, there may be situations where the audience cannot immerse themselves, which would be awkward.
"Yeah, it can be achieved through simple actions," Kiyoura Mai casually threw the clipped nails into the trash can, "such as being there when the husband is feeling down. Supporting the husband's plans and being happy when he's happy."
"Hey, is this request a bit too high?" Li Xia twitched the corner of his mouth, is that girl in Kiyoura Mai's mouth an angel?
"Let's make the viewers feel the beauty in simplicity," Kiyoura Mai crossed her arms, "going on a date, sharing a deep gaze, kissing each other, exploring secrets, gaining knowledge, and developing together."
"Sorry, but our content is suitable for all ages, so those things won't appear." Li Xia pouted. Kiyoura Mai is actually very talented, she can quickly perceive what a script is missing. Of course, he can't just listen to her completely, otherwise, it will become R-rated stuff.
"Leave the details to me," Akane said as she walked in wearing a loose T-shirt, drying her hair with a towel. "Akane is the best at it~"
Li Xia turned his head and saw the two snow-white long legs peeking out from under her T-shirt. Akane isn't tall, but her proportions are great, so her legs look long.
However, since the T-shirt only reached the upper thighs, and it seemed like there were only exposed long white legs, the visual effect made it look like there was a vacuum inside.
As she walked over, the T-shirt swayed, revealing the black...
"Woot!" Li Xia exclaimed angrily. "Put your underwear on, you guy!"
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Akane has a great talent for writing. Since she joined, she has improved Li Xia's script. Each sentence describes the scene so well that it feels like you are witnessing it firsthand when he reads it.
The characters' lines have also become shorter and clearer, and their personalities are vividly portrayed on paper.
The wife, always wearing a gentle smile, and the husband, who is ordinary but hardworking, finally decides to give up his career and stay at home with his wife to change their lives.
They all seem to have come to life.
"Maybe you can add a paragraph here, where the wife notices the repairman's muscles, but the husband only wants to sleep at night," Kiyoura Mai suggested seriously. "After all, women's needs tend to increase after marriage, and men may lose interest in their wives after being with them for a long time, unless they can constantly explore new ways."
"Don't listen to her, Akane," Li Xia said with a pout. "Kiyoura Mai is good at everything except driving."
Kiyoura Mai came up with the idea, summarized it, and wrote it into a script, which was then refined by Akane. The three of them worked quickly and smoothly, as if they didn't need Kavin anymore.
"Akane, with your level, you should be able to write excellent works." Li Xia looked at Akane, whose fingers were quickly dancing on the keyboard. "It would be a pity to give up."
Li Xia originally thought Akane was just an ordinary light novel author who became popular because of a good theme.
But after this collaboration, Li Xia discovered that her writing skills were very profound.
To give an analogy, it's like in A-manga, in order to make the work more exciting, they would exaggerate the female characters or the plot.
But true masters don't need to do that. The female characters they create just stand there, exuding beauty, with every aspect being exciting.
"Because I don't have anything I want to write about," Akane smiled and looked at Li Xia.
"But with your typing speed, writing 20,000 words a day shouldn't be a problem," Li Xia pointed at the screen. After a few hours, Akane had already revised a script of 6,000 words.
"Because I'm with my dad," Akane's smile has always been pure, so Li Xia couldn't tell if she was telling the truth with that sentence.
She placed a hand on her chest. "When Akane feels needed, inspiration will naturally flow out from within her body."
Li Xia didn't press for more, as the author's inspiration was always a mysterious thing. "Do you need anything else?" he asked.
"If possible," Akane smiled, sticking out her tongue and pointing, "I want to try writing a script while nibbling on something."
"Sure, your wish is my command!" Li Xia handed her a banana from the side. "Nibble on this, but don't break it."
"Hehe," Akane chuckled lightly, not getting angry, and indeed nibbled on the banana while typing, proving her exquisite oral skills.
The three of them worked like this until late at night, not knowing how late it was before they finally couldn't hold on and fell asleep.
The next day, the sunlight shone through the window.
Li Xia, still half-asleep, rubbed his eyes and first looked down, finding no one lying there, then glanced around.
Kiyoura Mai was sleeping soundly, snoring with saliva dripping; Akane was hugging a pillow, burying her head in it, sleeping sweetly.
Everyone was neatly dressed. It turns out those scenes in movies where people wake up to find they've been taken advantage of are all fake.
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